Hello friends,
why, do you wonder, have i made a re-translation? Simple, there where many things that keep bothering me for some time now about my translations. Especially the capital letters in the letters have bothered me. Also there is a song that i forgot to translate, it was "Liebe, Hasse, Leben und Tod" (Love, hate, life and death). So i spend some time and made it better this time, of course you all deserver the best and i give my best. The new translation can be found in the attachment.
And this is what i have done:

-Removed the capital letters in the lyrics (Because in english you write everything small)
-Replaced some words with new ones
-Added the song "Liebe, Hasse, Leben und Tod" (Love, hate, life and death)
-Removed some spelling mistakes (this live and life thing confuses me everytime)

I hope this time everything is all right.

Dateianlage:

Dorn Lyrics - Re-translatet by Sauron.zip

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Lost inside a cycle of dreams
Transforming night into day
I try to grab the light
But only darkness remains for me