Hello friends, why, do you wonder, have i made a re-translation? Simple, there where many things that keep bothering me for some time now about my translations. Especially the capital letters in the letters have bothered me. Also there is a song that i forgot to translate, it was "Liebe, Hasse, Leben und Tod" (Love, hate, life and death). So i spend some time and made it better this time, of course you all deserver the best and i give my best. The new translation can be found in the attachment. And this is what i have done:
-Removed the capital letters in the lyrics (Because in english you write everything small) -Replaced some words with new ones -Added the song "Liebe, Hasse, Leben und Tod" (Love, hate, life and death) -Removed some spelling mistakes (this live and life thing confuses me everytime)
Hiho friends, today i've completed the translation for the lyrics. I hope you like them, if there are mistakes, please tell me. PS: I have already translatet three songs some time ago, you can find them here: http://www.d-o-r-n.de/down/DORN_Lyrics_S...eit_English.txt
So let`s begin:
1. Eisglanz
Ice Glance Translation by Sauron
The hate raves in your body and the world tears your flesh it doesn't hurt, the pain is gone and you surrender yourself to the foolish ice
"Welcome to this beautiful land come closer, don't be afraid Here you shall forge your new bound Come! Take my hand!"
Now you glance into your gloomy valley full of lie, power and agony Here rules the curse of the winter band Henceforth dark is your day
Now go on and dream your life Find your destiny also with icy blessing you let yourself blind by winter but your luck you will not find there
Then the pure ones want to see the ice melt Words of revenge will abuse you Your death will sown the fire You will burn and your lips will pray
Your ashes scatters the wind And whispering laughts the child: "You are dead! Leave my land!" ...and torns the bound
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4. Windtränen
Wind Tears Translation by Sauron
The trees hums a song The needles dance to it It strokes gently the childrens hair And whispers of pain and agony
The branches dandles in the wind The forest is sunken in moonlight A Child dandles in the needles Gleams soft, with a pale face
The trees sings his song The flakes dance with him Dandles, whispering it kiss the child His last breath takes the wind
It carries the lore swiftly across the land The story of the forest, of moon and child And the fathers harks to the winterwind Screams, mourn and cry themself blind
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5. Nachtblut
Nightblood Translation by Sauron
The world is at change Time ends Here! In the shadows of night Here! At the gate of darkness And corruption blackens the blood
This is the place where the dead walks Where storms and nights of revenge uprise Here where the breath burns And the shadows drowns everything in their blood
Throuhg the gate creeps a fog Screams and whispers attend him On the path an army marches His battle cry for revenge stokes valor
WE CALL THE SHADOWS WE CALL THE NIGHT VITIATION COMES VENGEANCE AND HATE
The world is at change Here in the waft of the fog Here in the march of the army And finally black is blood and heart
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6. Winterwacht
Winter watch Translation by Sauron
The wind touched very gently and smooth With cold wind the deep night In this white bed wakes up A pale heart made of ice
Henceforth this sky shall blind His thouhgt and doing aggrieve with foolishness The Lie shall complete the word Falsehood defiles the mirror
Can you hear his song sound? Can you feel how they conquer you? The melody of your false suggestion Guardians they are who sing
Along and along, oh winterchild Human and soul freezes the icewind The fathers kept watch about his sense Hold the spell, leave it blind
The winter feeds again the night His winds sow this icy might In false snow it awakes Again a child of the winter watch
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7. Spiegel der Unendlichkeit
Mirror of infinity Translation by Sauron
Yet for thousand tides long Assassins and ravagers draws throuhg the land Poisons, blinds and bring along the icebrand The legendary myth at godlike mightglance
Now they stand in the valley of eternity The army of winter, the army of pureness Icy ground gave birth to hate and envy And the ember of heaven brings death and harm
The blades of might crosses Driven, rushed, blended and deadly Anger and pain rules the battle Blood and screams of unleashed trustpower
Inexorable and mercyless Winter and fire rages in the womb of trust And they shall never see the end Nerver find the way of salvation
In this war the banner of eternity wafts And so the circle of destiny closes In this world never ruled an deity Commander is only the mirror of infinity
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9. Kaltes Herz
Cold Heart Translation by Sauron
I am the harm, i am the pain I am the sepsis that nurtures you I bring fear and fright along I am the ulcer that always returns
My lips whispers your names Choke and die on my breath Pray to god, beg for mercy But it is my blood in which you bath
You hate and love me Conquer and denie me I am your voice, your face With me you suffocate Godlight
Horror and fright are my power Burn! Burn and die in my battle Fools! Only i have ignite the fire Fools! Myself have brought you down
I am the cold that feeds you I am yours! Your winterheart
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10. Kriecher
Creeper Translation by Sauron
I want that you run I want that you burn So that wrath terms your names So that fire will sear your smile
Run! And run you condemned ones Your joy shall vaporize in hate You shall share my being You all shall overtake this harm
I see them laugh I see them dance From fraglant taunt contaminated servants And i hate their grimaces
They honour and love themself Swear on their only true light Vow and praise their lifes On that they nurture their blindness
False! False and stupid you are Creeps like lower animals I will see your you burn In decadence you will perish
Freu mich natürlich auch schon wie ein Schnitzel auf das neue Album. Die gehörten Songs klingen schon mal recht vielversprechend.*schon ganz aufgeregt sei*
Dorn has made a new Song called "Königin des Feuers" (Queen of Fire). You can download the Song here:http://www.d-o-r-n.de/down/KoeniginDesFeuers.mp3 . I have translated the Lyrics, hope you like the Result:
Queen of Fire
It is black, dead and beautiful pure Only Dust and Shadows, no Life, no be, Trough Ruins of long forgotten Splendour and Shine Haunts the Silence of the Ghost of the Past
They breathe and whisper of unspeakable Grief About their burned Bodys, about their Pain Abysmal Screams howls loud around their dead Bones But they break, resound, choke on black Stone
A Runlet of Perdition flows across the Land Through a World, where the Song of Fire sounded Along at Pictures of Fear and Dread To the black Forest, where everything began
A Smell of bare Abhorrence fills the Air The Sea of Corpses spread its distinctiv sweet Scent And high above this almost endless Crypt there dances the Pureness at the red Sky in silent Revengefulness
Snow shall fall no more Water shall freeze no more No Child shall forge false Bounds
Now the silence prevails, around which bolts itself Flames. On that no more will never sing a Child from Winter.
Thanks for the Hint. Well, i can't edit my Post now, so there are some Things i wanna say:
First, thanks for the positive Opinions. I really put Effort into the Translation and yes, i know it's not perferct. Some Things are difficult to translate and my English is not very good. Second, the Downloadlink doesn't work anymore. Seems that the uploaded File was removed due inactivity. But since you can find all Lyrics here i don't think that it's necesarry to upload them again. Last but not least, i'm very happy to read some Opinions, even if they come late. Thank you, People. If they are new Lyrics coming from Dorn, i will translate them.
Hab mir letztens auf http://www.deathmetal.at das Video "I - The Machine" gezogen und war sehr angetan von der Musik. Ich hatte mir mal die CD "Scourge of Malice" gekauft, aber die hatte mir überhaupt nicht zugesagt. Nachdem ich mir das Video angeschaut habe, habe ich mir kurze Zeit später die CD besorgt und kann die nur empfehlen.
I have uploaded the Lyrics in case you want them. I hope this is okay, if not than i will remove it. There are some Things i have changed:
* Added the Lyrics of "Liebe, Hass, Leben und Tod" (Love, Hate, Live and Death) * Added a missing Line in the Song "Heldentod" (A Heros Death) * Corrected some spelling Mistakes
The File contains all Lyrics, including the two new Songs "Flammender Zorn" (Flaming Wrath) and "Gottkind" (Godchild). It's a ZIP-File so you need WIN-Zip or any other Program that can extract ZIP-Files. And so you download it: Click on the Link above, don't right-click, that wont work. Open it and than you have to wait a few Seconds before the Download begins. Thats it!
Primordial - The Gathering Wilderness Eisblut - Schlachtwerk The Vision Bleak - Carpahtia Vesania - God the Lux Slough Feg - Atavism Nile - Annihilation of the Wicked Mors Principum Est - The Unborn Kamelot - The black Halo Stormlord - The Gorgon Cult Fjoergyn - Ernte im Herbst
I haven't been here for quite some Time, so please excuse me! As you may have noticed, Dorn have recorded some new Songs. They are called "Flammender Zorn" and "Gottkind". I have translated the Lyrics so you can understand them. I know that the Translation is not perfect, but i hope you like them anyway. Enough talking, here are the Lyrics:
The first Song: Flammender Zorn (Flaming Wrath)
The End is near, it's at hand Light yields the Darkness Grief becomes a new meaning The Dominion of Winter is over
Fire rains down from the Sky Chaos brings a new Night The World burns in my Battle From Wrath and Jealousy for a divine Might
I bring Darkness and Death Child! Feel the Horror, the Wrath, the Need From my Hand drips your Red Stroken dead, wailing you drop from your Throne
The Feather of Terror draws the Land The Heros of Winter dies in the Sand My Wrath of Fire banished the Ice And his etching Breath burned everything
The Dominion of Winter is over Yet Phantasm and Lies remain
Only the Dead of this gory Night Witness the End of my Battle And Ashes trickles shallow and soft On the cold Grave of the Winter Night
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The second Song Gottkind (Godchild)
On the Sky the Darkness give Birth To the Winter of Hate and Jealousy The World already engulfed in a white Dress Perdition rejoice on Humanity
Now it wanders through this Worlds Valleys Heralds its Teachings, its Seed Tremples old Paths, old Halls Old Beliefs will fall through Winter
Now look back to your Paths Desecrates and tainted ancient Sagas White Ashes waves your Winterwind On holy Land, you wretched Godchild
Listen to, you craven Being Fire shall rain down upon you Die through the Sword of the Pagans Feel their Suffering
But Winter will never end With his dark Guard, with his Children The old Sagas frozen in the Winterland The old Gods are dead, slaughtered by the Hand of the Child
AARGGHH, so viele geile Bands und ich wohne so weit weg. Ich wohne in Hessen und würde mit dem Zug ca. 4 Stunden bis nach Essen brauche. Mann, das macht ihr doch mit Absicht, oder ??
Ich bin schon seit Jahren ein großer Rollenspielfan. Das hat damals schon angefangen, als ich mir mein SNES gekauft habe. Mein erstes Spiel dafür war "Secret Of Mana", das ich auch heute noch gerne spiele. Ich bin auch ein großer "Final Fantasy" Fan. Ich habe die die Teil 6,7,8 und 9 durchgespielt. Nicht vergessen sollten wir "Zelda". Die Serie ist einfach Kult und ich kanns kaum erwarten, bis der nächste Teil für den Game Cube rauskommt. Im Moment spiele ich gerade "Star Ocean - Till the End of Time" für PS2 und "Fable" auf der X-Box. Beides sehr empfehlenswerte Spiele. Für den PC habe ich auch einige feine Rollenspiele. Diablo 1 und 2, Arx Fatalis, Morrowind, Vampires Redemption und Bloodlines, Pool of Radiance und Neverwinter Nights. WoW spiele ich ab und zu bei meinem Kumpel. Ich spiele einen Menschenpaladin namens "Megatherion". Da mein Kumpel leider fast die ganze Woche keine Zeit hat -er studiert- kann ich nur mal für ein paar Stunden am Wochenende spielen. Die meiste Zeit spielt er -er ist schon Level 35-. Everquest habe ich noch nicht gespielt, werde es wahrscheinlich auch nicht. So wie ich das gelesen habe, soll das Spiel sehr schwer sein und nicht gerade einsteigerfreundlich.
A Request to the English speaking Forum Members: Please introduce yourself. I think, its in the Interest of all other Members. Please tell us somethink about you. Also tell us, for Example, how do you take notice of the Band "Dorn".
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18.02.2007 05:20
